In the heat of the moment immediately following an incident such as the apprehension of the Mavi Marmara last Monday morning one can understand, although not necessarily excuse, mistakes being made by journalists under pressure and eager to get copy to their hungry editors despite the fact that the fog of war is still thick and the facts of the incident are by no means clear. However, four days after the dust had already settled, Linda Grant came out with a CiF article so replete with vacuous hyperbole and deliberate inaccuracies that no serious editor should have allowed it to be published.
Here are just some examples of the highly inaccurate and borderline hysterical language which Grant deliberately employed in order to whip up her readers’ fervor:
“Piracy”
“Massacre”
“Innocent civilians brutally massacred in an act of piracy”
“Peace activists”
“Starving millions in Gaza”
“Zionist project”
“Inmates of a vast open air prison”
“Collective punishment”
As the old saying goes, empty vessels make most noise. None of the above words or phrases has but a tenuous connection to reality except in the minds of those whose opinions of Israel’s attempt to prevent ships from breaking the naval blockade had been formed long before the Mavi Marmara had even weighed anchor. But of course reality and accuracy are not what interest Grant in this piece. She is attempting to whip her readers into a certain emotional state by evoking vapid comparisons between homeless, malnourished, refugee Holocaust survivors in 1947 and a surreal hybrid of politically naïve, relatively affluent, Western ‘peace’ campaigners who are delightfully ignorant of the realities of life at war or under the constant threat of terror, mixed with terror activists (some even possibly paid to be so) whose ultimate aim is the destruction of Israel and the death of Jews, not because of political conflict but because of religiously-inspired racist ideologies. And yet Grant finds herself capable of writing the following:
“why would the passengers not defend themselves against their attackers, exactly as the refugees had done in 1947?”
Not content with this ‘sand in the eyes’ tactic, Grant goes on to make the somewhat amusing claim that Swedish author Henning Mankell “risked his own life to bring aid to the starving millions of Gaza.”. Beyond the hyperbole of the ‘starving millions’, this claim also falls flat as a pancake when one takes into account that neither Mankell nor anyone else had prior reason to assume any threat to his life based either on the experiences of previous flotillas or that of the other five boats accompanying the Mavi Marmara, all of which were detained peacefully and without incident. The hype escalates even further when Grant pronounces Mankell’s ‘authoritative presence’ to be more significant than the opinions and analysis of maritime experts. Despite her literary credentials, Grant has clearly well and truly lost the plot here, as is further indicated by her subsequent comparison of the Palestinian solidarity movements with the campaign against South African apartheid.
Towards the end of her embarrassingly over-emotional and desperately confused article, Grant states that “[w]e look back on the ship Exodus and wonder if our parents and grandparents should have thought harder and emoted less.”. By this she appears to be claiming that the world would have been a better place had world public opinion not been in favour of the establishment of the only state either capable or willing to take in one million refugees from post-war Europe and some 800,000 refugees from Arab and Muslim countries. Go figure the motives behind such a suggestion.
Even if Grant is incapable of overcoming her painfully obvious dominant emotions in order to write about the flotilla incident with less hyperbole, more facts and less drama-queen tugging at the reader’s heart strings, that does not provide an excuse for the editor who cleared this article for publication. Both Grant and the Guardian have obviously fallen into the trap of letting their emotions get the better of them and the result is something more suited to a Mills and Boon novella than the pages of a newspaper whose role it is to inform its readers, not try to entertain them.






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June 7, 2010 at 11:08 am
MindTheCrap
Linda:
Thanks for the insight into how CiF works. I appreciate that CiF wants opinion pieces from various viewpoints, but on the other hand the Guardian should be interested in maintaining a minimum standard. This is not only a problem with I/P articles – I have seen many bad articles on various subjects. There is also a difference between printing a disagreeable opinion and printing facts that the are blatantly incorrect (I recall your comments on the Abe Hayeem article that claimed that Tel-Aviv was built on ‘stolen land’).
As for the moderation – that’s a subject in itself. This is the greatest failure of CiF and I pointed out above an example of what might be. Every time CiF has an article asking for opinions on how to improve CiF there are many serious comments posted about moderation. These comments are always ignored in the replies and summation posted by Matt/Georgina/etc. The only conclusion is this is the CiF that they want and that really doesn’t say anything positive about the Guardian !
Finally, I want to say that I truly appreciate your taking the time to reply and engage the people here.
June 7, 2010 at 11:17 am
Linda Grant
If it were up to me, there would be no comments at all and that would solve the problem! Many good writers won’t write for CiF because they won’t put up with the abuse.
June 7, 2010 at 11:21 am
peterthehungarian
Ms. Grant
One further point. the CiF pieces are often attacked for being ‘biased’ or ‘unbalanced’ They are not news reports, they are not written by news journalists, they are clearly opinion pieces usually written by people not employed by the paper, to stimulate debate from various viewpoints.
Really? Then why CIF publishes Serth Freedman’s and Rachel Shabi’s comical disatortions and lies disguised as reports on real events?
Opinions you say. So your opinion is that:
Innocent civilians brutally massacred in an act of piracy
this is not an opinion, this is incitement and deligimitization
Starving millions in Gaza”
and
Inmates of a vast open air prison
these are outright lies, they have nothing to do with opinion
Were you just wanted to show a mirror of the British public’s views you should have written it in your article. You didn’t do it then and I don’t believe it now. You are not only inciting against Israel but cowardly trying to explain it off.
June 7, 2010 at 11:24 am
Oy Va Goy
I loved your novel, Linda. Can’t say the same about your strange CiF article but the novel is lovely.
June 7, 2010 at 11:59 am
Arabella Meller
I wonder whether Linda actually read what IsraeliNurse wrote. There is a truth beyond the British media’s hype and hysteria and that is what we actually experience in Israel.
I hope she spends a few minutes reading what IsraeliNurse wrote and that she makes an effort, perhaps via this blog, to find out the truth of the situation, or at least to give herself the opportunity of balancing out the guff her Exodus article was laden with.
for instance: the actual population of Gaza (not hard to establish)
what really happened on the Marmara – a few videos and paying attention to who says what
etc, for there doubtless is an etc.
Here is something I’ve just read on cif from the Irish Times
Thursday, 3 June, 2010
1. At today’s hearing in Dublin of the Irish parliament Joint Foreign Affairs Committee , Shane Dillon, First Mate of the Challenger I, one of the boats in the Gaza ‘humanitarian aid’ flotilla, revealed that his own boat was carrying no aid.
He said that he carried only activist members of the ‘Free Gaza Movement’, 17 in all.
He said their intention was to ‘break the blockade’ and ‘open up the port’ of Gaza .
2. He stated to the Committee that he did not see what happened on the deck of the Mavi Marmara, the Turkish ship in the flotilla, when the Israeli soldiers came on board the MM from helicopters. He had earlier witnessed 2 Israeli Navy Corvettes coming alongside the MM, when passengers aboard the MM threw ‘rubbish bags’ down at them and trained water fire hoses on them. He had then left the scene to upload a satellite link.
3. Those detained at Ashdod were allowed to go to the toilet ‘one by one’, contrary to his RTE claim yesterday that they were ‘not allowed’ to go to the toilet.
June 7, 2010 at 12:45 pm
Silke
thanks Oy Va Goy for the info about the novel
I am ashamed of myself I should have realised right away that it was a novelist “in the mood” – sticking to facts is kind of boring without some “juicy” unrelated bits thrown in for the “crowd”
BTW there are lots out there who like Henning Mankell’s books for one reason or another (I don’t), but that has no connection whatsoever to his Diary published by The Daily Beast where the most interesting piece of info is that the IDF “stole” his socks of all things. (maybe the IDF had a good reason to get rid of the socks? sometimes you know socks may actually … Silke now stop, socks which belong to Henning Mankell can only be a delight to handle)
- one of the most interesting books I ever read was by Knut Hamsun (August ???) and you know of what he was capable …
Now I’ll wait and see whether Linda protests having been “linked” to Hamsun, if she does I’ll probably concede that she has a point.
June 7, 2010 at 1:28 pm
JerusalemMite
Linda Grant
Many good writers won’t write for CiF because they won’t put up with the abuse.
Linda. If I was a good writer, I would never agree that anything from me would be reproduced in The guardian. And not because of abuse. Nick Cohen suffers that on all his articles, whatever the subject but I understand that he doesn’t actually write for the Guardian.
June 7, 2010 at 1:42 pm
Toko LeMoko
Linda Grant
“They are not news reports, they are not written by news journalists, they are clearly opinion pieces usually written by people not employed by the paper”
Guardian news reports are just as shoddy, biased and incompetent as your own CiF articles.
June 7, 2010 at 2:08 pm
Heres to Davy.
MindTheCrap
.
” a paper doesn’t publish endless articles on one subject unless it has decided that this subject is the World’s Main Problem. ”
A nuclear power is breaking international treaties , international laws , and placing what seems to be collective punishment on a million people.These people have a billion co religionists many of whom use the Israeli situation as a cover for their own problems .
It not only is the worlds number one problem..it has been for generations except for brief moments Iran/Iraq war …Berlin Wall … Chernobyl… Serbia …start of Iraq war…
June 7, 2010 at 2:19 pm
Arabella Meller
Where do cif authors get their misinformation from? Why, from the Guardian articles, some of which do double duty as article and cif-advert-fishing-material.
June 7, 2010 at 2:19 pm
peterthehungarian
berchmans
A nuclear power is breaking international treaties , international laws , and placing what seems to be collective punishment on a million people.
You shouldn’t speak this way about your homeland…
June 7, 2010 at 2:30 pm
Silke
Jerusalemmite
if I were a really good writer I might try to figure out where the holes in the Guardians censorship are and if I should find any which my talent if I had any would allow me to make use of I would try to tickle the brains of the reader a bit.
I just read this by Nick Cohen http://standpointmag.co.uk/node/3117
towards the end he makes some very good points about the “bulletpoint style”. Maybe it would be time for the gifted amongst us to find another angle, just to keep it fresh.
For example I liked Israelinurse’s post the other day which she wrote as a personal letter more than a bit refreshing and effective. David Harris btw is trying his hand on something similar in the JPost – maybe telling “them” “it” that way may lead to something fresh and surprising – I know the chance is exceedingly slim but only who dare to try have a chance to fail.
Of course I also like this argument from Pilar Rahola in the piece.
“To fight against anti-Semitism is not the duty of the Jews, it is the duty of the non-Jews. “
June 7, 2010 at 3:46 pm
Serendipity
Fooledmeonce, there may be malnutrition but only in the enclaves in Gaza which Hamas relies on to provide propaganda for the press and its useful idiots around the world. People who dine at Roots, for example, are hardly malnourished are they, and methinks that those who are malnourished are so primarily because they cannot pay Hamas for food which they should be getting free. It’ll be a cold day in hell, though, before CiF and the MSM acknowledge that the problem is one of distribution, not lack of supply.
Linda Grant: “…..The similarities between the Exodus and the Gaza aid ships is that they were both running against a blockade and both changed world public opinion….”
You should know by now that, given the hate-filled atmosphere at CiF, you would have to spell that out to your audience (and my guess is that even then they would not have wilfully misunderstood the rather lame analogy). Whatever possessed you to assume that the average mouth breather there would know what you meant without your actually doing the equivalent of hitting them over the head with it?
Having said that, your excuse is a lame one. You were playing to the choir and writing for effect and your whole article is designed to appeal to the lowest common denominator, ie the Guardianistas who never let the truth get in the way of their hatred.
You really cannot now expect to run away from reaping the whirlwind that you sowed.
June 7, 2010 at 3:54 pm
Yohoho
“…they are clearly opinion pieces usually written by people not employed by the paper, to stimulate debate from various viewpoints. …”
Earth to Linda Grant, are you receiving????
Anti-Israel, pro-Islamist articles are written and the comments are carefully whittled to show that they are agreed with – if you bothered at all to look below the line you would see how carefully reasoned arguments are removed and yet the half-baked ones which support the writers’ views, however benighted, are allowed to remain. Your friend Seth Freedman’s are a case in point.
How, pray, can people debate if they are not allowed to express their views, however carefully and peaceably? By ESP?
June 7, 2010 at 3:54 pm
Margie
” the IDF “stole” his socks of all things” Whole pairs? how fortunate and efficient. My washing machine takes socks leaving one of the most useless things I know, single socks.
June 7, 2010 at 4:07 pm
Silke
Margie
maybe you should send the single ones to Mankell, maybe he takes that as a sign of support and he can sell them during some book tour as reliquia to fans and buy nourishing spirits from the proceeds
I’m dying to find out whether the IDF kept him oiled while in custody or whether he had to do without for at least so many hours that it made him ache more than a bit.
June 7, 2010 at 4:14 pm
Margie
Silke sudden withdrawal of fluids that the body has become accustomed to, even if they are toxic fluids, can have hallucinatory side effects, which might account for …
However I would gladly donate my family’s lone socks in a good cause.
June 7, 2010 at 4:26 pm
Silke
Margie
LOL
in case you’d suffer one of these days from a bout of charitable feelings here’s an address with a gorgeous foto of the Suffkopp (swill head) – enjoy
http://www.mankell.de/
June 7, 2010 at 5:56 pm
Rysk
Judy – bang on the money as per normal
Linda Grant – What has happened to you?
June 8, 2010 at 3:30 am
Fairplay
It must be so painful to be deprived of friends and an admiring audience.
So painful indeed that one can be tempted to accept the Guardian’s filthy lucre.
Melanie Phillips left the left. Anyone with an ounce of sense and self-respect would have done the same.
June 8, 2010 at 4:37 am
Silke
I think left and right have lost their meaning, we have sadly entered times of which Carl Zuckmayer’s (devil’s general) householder said about folks’ behaviour in WW2:
difficult times make decent people behave a bit more decent…
as best I remember she didn’t finish the sentence but I’m sure you’ll have no problem with doing that for her
June 9, 2010 at 5:56 pm
Judy
Eve Garrard writing at Norm Geras’ blog has done a mordantly brilliant filleting of the way that for relatively obscure but Guardianista-approved authors like Fintan O’Toole and Ian Banks, Israel is uniquely condemned as lacking in humanity and morality despite far greater and more egregious killings and acts of aggression by such nations as Turkey, Iran, China, Russia, the Sudan and others.
Given Linda Grant’s language of “innocent civilians massaced”, “starving millions in Gaza” and all the other grotesque misuses of language highlighted by Israelinurse, Garrard’s post applies as justly to Linda Grants CiF article. But Gerrard suggests links with the way the Nazis and other anti-semites have routinely demonised Jews as inhuman, immoral, showing contempt for other nations etc.
I’m sure Grant would be horrified and outraged by such analogies.
But why has she resorted to such gross language, which as other commenters have pointed out, is the language of incitement towards a nation threatened with termination virtually weekly by Ahamdinejad, his fair weather friends and his proxies in Gaza and Lebanon.
The “explanations” she’s offered in the comments here beggar belief. She wrote in a great hurry? So why should that cause an experienced journalist and a multiple award winning author to resort to the language of demagogic incitement and over the top hyperbole? I wouldn’t begin to lay claim to her level of skill and mastery of the language, but when I write things in too much of a hurry, it usually shows up in typos and less than wonderfully constructed sentences. Why should writing in a hurry result in referring to the death of nine people as a massacre? Why should it lead to resorting to the cliche of “starving millions”? She surely cannot have believed that sentence however hurriedly she wrote it. Or does she habitually think in gross inciteful cliches and need time to turn them into considered balanced prose?
Then we get all the mysterious hinting of “I could a tale unfold” where she suggests something like a cock up (rather than a conspiracy) went on in the toing and froing between her and the immortals at the Grauniad.
What are we supposed to make of that? The happy band of editors slipped in the offending phrases to colour things up? Or she usually writes like that, but there wasn’t time in all the hurry to subject the first draft to the usual intense subediting that turns it into the acutely observed commentary that’s her journalism at its best? Or it got spatchcocked with the electronic cuttings out frpm Seumas Milne’s latest over the top rant?
My guess is that this CiF piece is all about the wish to keep up her Street Cred with the Guardian, the Guardianistas and most of all the Israeli equivalent of the Looney Left (c/o Ha’aretz), who are also accustomed routinely to call almost any action of the current rightwing Israeli government fascist, murderous etc. I’d say those groups are her reference group. Their good opinion matters to her as does their recognition of her as one of their number, never less than at a time when they stand together shooting their collective mouths off in a lather of self-righteous but utterly off the wall rage.
Commenters’ suggestions that she did this for the £85 CiF pay are really way off the mark. Given her self-proclaimed dedication to seriously expensive high fashion, she’d hardly trouble herself to an hour’s hurried work merely to make the price of a second tier fashionista t-shirt.
And no doubt the thought never crossed her mind, but those Guardianistas do include all those folk who sit on juries that make the literary awards…
Writing an article that tried to apply the same reasoning to Israel’s actions that Eve Garrard has done..well, it wouldn’t do her too much good when her next novel gets sent out to the critics and the literary award shortlisters, would it? Not, I am sure, that such considerations would ever remotely have influenced the spurts of hateful and undeserved anti-Israel rhetoric in that CiF article. Or that said juries are ever influenced in any way by the perceived politics and appropriate gender cred of the writers they’re considering for awards.
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